War Zone

It is dark and dank in this place. And scary. The smell of pigeon shit and fusty soil are stuck in my nasal passages as I crouch, a loaded AK47 grasped so tightly in my right hand it makes an IMPRESSION. Heavy mud caked on my overalls weighs me down as I inch along toward safety. Flashes of gunfire light up the night sky behind me, followed abruptly by the cacophony of automatic weapons discharging. In that brief instant of light I can see I’m on the right path. My heart beats rapidly, fear makes my breathing hard. I hear a whisper. “Susan. Keep coming this way. Keep down.” Thank God, it’s Kevin. Kevin, my fearless and athletic lover, leads me through a maze of crumbling buildings away from our enemies. I stay at his heels as we slither through oozing mud, bird crap, and who knows what else, to a nearby two-story house, our reconnaissance point.

I send a silent pray of thankfulness to the heavens when we reach the interior unscathed. A wave of light from another burst of gunfire exposes the strained and pale faces of Patty and Dave, our team reunited. A plan evolves for two of us to sniper from the second floor vantage, the other two on the ground floor defense. I volunteer for the second floor action. So does Kevin. We wipe more mud on our faces for camouflage and ascend. Standing in complete stillness at the windows we watch for incoming movement. And it comes. Nearer and nearer. We’re not disclosing our advantage. We wait until they’re close enough to take out as many as possible. My heart, racing so hard as a new level of fear builds and builds until I can barely swallow. The enemy gets closer and closer, every forward movement one step closer to oblivion. Keep on coming baby. I’ve got them in my sights. Just a little more. Come on. Gunfire. Not from us. They’re wasting their ammo and losing any element of surprise. Hah.

I look at Kevin. He flashes me a grin, teeth white in their gun light, and gives me a nod. Okay. Here we go. I lock in on my scope. Depress my finger tight against the trigger to a resounding blast. One down. And another. There goes another. I see movement far too close. Oh damn, I FELT impact on my hand. My middle finger, stung and dripping.


Orange paintball.





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Comments

Janice said…
Ha! Nice one! You really had me going.
Brian Miller said…
haha. great take on the theme...love playing paintball.
Kris McCracken said…
I've never had the pleasure.
Tracey said…
My 5 year old has been on and on about paint ball this week. I have no idea where he heard about it, but he would have preferred your description to mine.
Funny, you got me. If I have to slither through pigeon shit, this is not for me!!!
injaynesworld said…
Good job! Could really see, feel, and smell the environment. And the orange paintball? Great "gotcha".
Magpie said…
Very nice! You had me right there with you.
Betsy Brock said…
Too fun...you really had me going there!
JennAventures said…
Stumbling upon your blog, reading the first part of this had me thrown as to what your theme was. Clever!
JeffScape said…
Excellent! Where can I get an AK-47 paintball gun?
Ed & Jeanne said…
I prefer to drop an orange paintball from orbit and nuke the entire planet just to be safe...
Wings1295 said…
Great take! Never 'played' paintball, myself. Sounds fun!
Kate Hanley said…
So funny, my daughter just brought up the idea of paintball. You totally had me going there though, nice take.
Tom said…
oh! Everytime i play paintball i get slaughtered.
not much fun.
e said…
Nicely written! Thanks for visiting me today. Happy TT.
Anonymous said…
O, that's clever! Happy TT from me, too
C.M. Jackson said…
whoa --you had me going there--diehard and 007 has nothing on you and paitball--great post-c
Baino said…
You're braver than me. I've seen the welts those things leave. Perhaps it's living in a warm climate and the body armour just isn't there but I know one young man who's still got a scar after 12 months! Good yarn.
Dreamhaven said…
Great story with a twist. Happy TT
BPOTW said…
Such a wonderful story! Thanks for the surprise ending!
Jaime said…
i always wanted to play paintball.
Katherine said…
HA! You got me!!! GREAT ONE!
lettuce said…
:-}

this gave me the wrong impression for a while...
good one

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